高中英语2025届高考读后续写个人成长类话题写作素材（写作步骤 主旨升华 真题链接）

高考英语读后续写个人成长类话题写作素材一、写作步骤第一步：成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）负面的心理描写可以揭示人物在成长前的内心世界，表达人物的性格、特点、感情等，这为后期成长的过程埋下伏笔。一、紧张1.Shetoldtheteacherthetruth,withherheartpoundinglikeadrum.她把真相告诉了老师,心跳得像打鼓一样。2.MyheartbeatsoviolentlythatIfeltlikesittingonpinsandneedles.心跳如此剧烈，我感到如坐针毡。3.IwasabouttorespondwhenIfeltmytonguetiedinandpalmssweating.我正要回答时，感到舌头被绑住了，手掌开始出汗。二、困惑1.Hissuddenchangeinmoodcompletelyconfusedme.他的情绪突然变化完全把我弄糊涂了。2.WhenIstoodonthestageinfrontofthelargeaudience,mymindwentblank.我站在舞台上面对大批观众时，我的头脑一片空白。3.Myheartskippedabeatanddisbeliefwashedoverme.我的心为之一颤，充满了怀疑。三、忧虑1.Worriedaboutthejourney,Iwasunsettledforthefirstfewdays.由于担心这次旅行，头几天我心神不宁。2.IwassonervousabouttheEnglishtestthatIlayawakehalfthenight,worrying.我对英语考试感到如此紧张，以至于大半夜都睡不着觉，心神不宁。3.Onhearingthebadnews,shefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn’thelpcryingbitterly.一听到这个坏消息，她被一股悲伤之情控制，忍不住哭泣。四、孤独1.Awaveoflonelinesswashedoverme.一阵孤独感席卷了我的全身。2.Coldwithnohopeforwarmth,Ifeltlikedrowninginacrowdofpeople.我感到又冷又无取暖的希望，感觉就像被人群淹没一样。五、绝望1.Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.听到这个消息，他非常绝望，把悲伤淹没在酒中。2.Hegazedattheconfusionaroundhimandwasoverwhelmedbyafeelingofdespair.他凝视着周围一片混乱，感到一阵绝望。3.Desperateandhelpless,shekneltdown,withtearsofregretstreamingdownhercheeks.绝望而无助的她跪了下来，悔恨的泪水顺着面颊流了下来。六、疲惫1.Exhausted,Islidintobedandfellfastasleep.我精疲力竭地躺在床上，很快就睡着了。2.Shefeltexhaustedandsatbythestreamrestingherachingfeet.她感到精疲力竭，坐在溪边休息着疼痛的双脚。七、羞愧5 1.Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushedtoherface.我感到非常羞愧，甚至能感觉到鲜血涌到脸上。2.Shefeltsoashamedofherfoolishbehaviorthatshecouldfeelherfaceburning.她为自己的愚蠢行为感到非常羞愧，以至于感到脸红了。3.AwaveofguiltsweptovermeasIadmittedthefactthatgoingtothemovieswastherealreasonwhyIwaslate.当我承认去看电影是我迟到的真正原因时，一阵恐惧向我袭来。第二步：成长中（努力挣扎应对+蜕变）1.Ireflectedonmyinitialdoubtsandhesitations.我反思了自己最初的疑虑和犹豫不决。2.“That’snottherightway.Patience,Will,Patience,”avoiceechoedinmyearsaftertheboysleft.“这不是正确的方式。耐心!意愿，耐心，”男孩们离开后，一个声音在我耳边回响。3.Asparkofhopekindledintheirhearts.他们心中燃起了希望的火花。4.Jaycelookeduptohim,hiseyessparklingwithhopeanddetermination.杰茜抬头看着他，眼睛里闪烁着希望和决心。5.Thatday,Ilearnedthatdoingsomethingmeaningfulforotherscouldalsobeawonderfulthing.那天，我懂得了为别人做点儿事也是很棒的。6.Thatday,Ilearnedabiglessonandunderstoodtheimportanceofbeinghonest.那天，我吸取了一个重大教训并理解了诚实的重要性。7.Unwillingtohandinallmyearnings,Iwasconsumedbyamixtureofsadnessanddisappointment.我不愿交出我所有的收入，我既悲伤又失望。8.Becauseofyou,Ilearnedinsightsoflife.因为有了你，我学会了感悟人生。9.Inspiredbyhimtoconquermyfear,Iwalkedconfidentlytowardstheclassroom,determinedtomakeachange.我被他鼓励，克服了恐惧，我信心满满地走向教室，决心作出改变。10.Iloveacceptingachallenge,stickingtomygoalandthenachievingmygoalthroughmyownefforts.我乐于接受挑战，坚持自己的目标，然后通过自己的努力达到目标。第三步：成长后的升华（感悟+感激+升华）1.IknewforsurethateverytimeIlostpatienceinthefutureIwouldremembermygrandfather’swords.我确信，将来每当我失去耐心时，我都会记住祖父的话。2.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadtrulyrealizedthemeaningofthegift---patience.这是我第一次真正体会到这份礼物的意义——耐心。3.ItdawnedonAdamthatoneshouldsticktohisdreamnomatterwhathappens.亚当突然想到无论发生什么事，都要坚持自己的梦想。4.IrealizedIcouldevenbewhomeverIwantedtobe.ThistaughtmethatIcouldchangemyself.我意识到我可以成为我想成为的任何人。这让我明白，我可以改变自己。二、主旨升华句型一：It’s...that...(强调句）1.(2025·八省联考卷)ItwasnotuntilthenthatIreallyunderstood“don’tjudgeabookbyitscover”.直到那时，我才真正明白“不要以貌取人”2.(2025·八省联考卷)ItwasthroughthisbraveadventurethatIgotacquaintedwiththeseenthusiasticanimalrescuers,whoweretoughoutsidebuttenderinside.正是通过这次勇敢的冒险，我结识了这些热情的动物救援人员，他们外表坚强，内心温柔。3.(2022·新课标I&II卷)Itwashisbraveheartandstrongfaiththatcouldmakesomethingunusualhappenfinally.5 正是他勇敢的心和坚定的信念，最终让一些不寻常的事情发生了。句型二：fromthenon+行动4.Fromthenon,Imadeupmymindtopasson“love”toothers.Justasasayinggoes,“Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.”从那以后,我下定决心向别人传递“爱”。俗话说:“玫瑰予人，手留余香。”5.Fromtheunforgettableexperience,Ihaverealizedthatthisrandomactofkindnesshasagreatinfluenceonme.从难忘的经历中，我意识到这种随意的善举对我有很大的影响。句型三：Itdawnedonsb.that...6.Itdawnedonmethatasimpleactcouldmaketheworldsomuchbetter.我恍然大悟一个简单的行为可以使世界变得如此美好。7.(2025·八省联考卷)Itdawnedonmethatbeinginagroupwithdiverseindividualscanbearewardingexperience.我突然意识到，与不同的人在一起可能是一次有益的经历。句型四：Only+状语...（倒装句）8.Onlywhenweopenupthedoorofourheartcanwebebathedinthebrilliantsunshine.只有当我们打开心扉，我们才能沐浴在阳光中。9.OnlythendidIrealizethatitwaskindnessandlovethatmadeourworldsowarmandbeautiful.直到那时候，我才意识到，正是爱和善意让我们的世界如此温暖美丽。句型五：主从复合句/With复合宾语结构10.(2021·新课标I&II卷)Withgratefultearshanginginhereyes,shekeptexpressinghergratitude:“Thankyousomuch!”她含着感激的泪水，不停地表达感激之情：“太感谢你了！”11.(2023·新课标I&II卷)Iowemysuccesstomysocialteacherwhoisabeaconinmylifeontheroadtowriting.我的成功归功于我的社交老师，他是我写作道路上的指路明灯。12.(2022·新课标I&II卷)Ashisusualtoothysmilegreetedme,Icouldn’thelpbutfeelasenseofcomfortandadmirationforhisresilience.当他像往常一样咧嘴笑着迎接我时，我忍不住对他的韧性感到安慰和钦佩。13.Lucywasrelievedthatshecouldbeseenandunderstood,withhersmilesparklinglikeadiamond.露西感觉很欣慰，因为她能被人看到和理解，她的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。14.Thisprovedarewardingexperience,wherehenotonlyharvestedjoy,butalsoappreciatedthevalueofefforts.事实证明，这是一次有益的经历，他不仅收获了快乐，还意识到了努力的价值。15.Inthesameway,weneedstruggletogrowstrongandsurvive.Wemustgothroughsomesufferingsifwereallywishtospreadourwingsandfly.同样地，我们需要奋斗来变强大和生存。如果我们真的想展翅飞翔，就必须经历磨难。16.Whathappenedtodaymademerealizethatforgivenessisakindofvirtue.今天发生的事情让我意识到宽恕是一种美德。17.ItwasthroughtheembarrassingexperiencethatIlearnednottoescapefrommydutyandtokeeparecordofmymoney,valuingeverypenny.正是通过这种尴尬的经历，我学会了不逃避职责，并记账，珍惜每一分钱。三、真题再现（2024年八省联考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。IwasinPhiladelphiaforaconferencewhenIsawanadinthehotel.Anearbytheater5 wasshowingadocumentary(纪录片)aboutseverallocalanimalsheltersthatwerehelpingtosaveabandoneddogsacrossthecountry.Iloveanimals,andIfeltanurgetogotothisfundraisingevent.However,noneofmyco-workerswouldgowithme,andIwasworriedaboutwalkingonthestreetaloneatnight.Iresignedmyselftospendingtheeveninginmyhotelroom,butassoonasIgotbacktomyroomIfeltrestlessandbored.Thetheaterwheretheeventwastakingplacewasonlyaboutfiveblocksfromthehotel,andtheareaaroundthehoteldidn’tseemparticularlydangerous.So,Idecidedtobraveit.Igatheredupmywalletandroomkeyandsetoff.Itwasalreadygettingdarkandthestreetswerenearlydeserted.Imanagedtofindthestreetthetheaterwason,butwhenIturnedthecorner,Istoppedinshock.Infrontofthetheaterwereagroupofbikers—verybig,tough-lookingbikers.I’veknownlotsofmotorcycleenthusiastsandmostarenicepeople.However,inthiscase,Iwasawomanallalone,inastrangeneighborhood,atnight,andthereweretwentyorsoverylargemen—allwearinginsignia(徽章)thatindicatedtheywereinsomesortofclub—standingbeforeme.Warningbellsbegantosoundinmyhead,andmyheartwaspounding.WasIattherighttheater?HadImisreadthedateoftheevent?AsignoutsidethetheatertoldmethatIwasintherightplaceontherightevening.Nevertheless,IwonderedifIshouldrushbacktomyhotelinsteadofwalkingthroughthatcrowdofbikers.IfinallydecidedthatIwouldbesaferinsidethetheater.Hopefully,thebikerswouldhavegoneawaybythetimethefilmwasover.注意：(1)续写词数应为150个左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.____________________________Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.____________________________【满分范文】Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Theywerechattingloudlyandseemedtofilleverycorneroftheplace.Myheartsankevenfurther.Iquicklyfoundanemptyseatinthebackrow,tryingtomakemyselfasinconspicuousaspossible.Iclutchedmybagtightly,constantlyglancingaround,prayingthatnothingbadwouldhappen.Everynowandthen,Ipeekedatthebikers,wonderingwhattheyweredoinghere.Weretheygoingtocausetrouble?Thetensionintheairwaspalpable,andIregrettedmydecisiontocomealone.Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.Theyhadcometosupportthefundraiserforthelocalanimalshelters.Asthedocumentaryunfolded,showingtheplightoftheabandoneddogs,Isawmanyofthebikerswipingawaytears.TheywereasmovedasIwasbytheheartwarmingandheartbreakingstories.Duringtheintermission,someofthemevencameovertome,smilingkindlyandaskingifIwasenjoyingthefilm.Theirtoughexteriorshidbig,softhearts.IfeltashamedofmyinitialfearandwastrulygratefulthatIhaddecidedtocome.Wespenttherestoftheeveningsharingourloveforanimalsanddiscussingwaystohelp.【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在费城参加会议期间，看到酒店附近剧院有一场关于动物救助站救助流浪狗的纪录片放映及筹款活动，作者因喜爱动物想去参加，却在剧院外看到一群看起来凶巴巴的摩托骑手，犹豫后还是进入剧院，希望电影结束时骑手们已离开。5 【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句“我匆匆走进剧院，却发现里面有更多的骑手。”可知，第一段可描写作者进入剧院后，面对更多骑手时内心的忐忑、不安，以及所采取的试图让自己安全、不引人注意的行动，比如找角落座位、紧紧抓包、频繁观察骑手等，展现当时紧张氛围。②由第二段首句“电影开始时，我意识到这些骑手是一个动物救援组织。”可知，第二段可描写电影播放过程中作者看到骑手们被纪录片触动的表现，以及中场休息时骑手们与作者友好互动的情景，体现出骑手们外表与内心的反差，突显温暖主题。2.续写线索：进入剧院，遇到更多骑手——内心恐惧找座躲避——电影开场，知晓骑手身份——观影中骑手真情流露——中场休息友好交流3.词汇激活：行为类：①紧握：clutch/grab/grasp/seize②偷看：peekat/stealalookat/glanceat③支持：support/back/uphold/advocate情绪类：①感动：moved/touched/affected②羞愧：ashamed/embarrassed【点睛】【高分句型1】Everynowandthen,Ipeekedatthebikers,wonderingwhattheyweredoinghere.(运用了现在分词短语作状语和what引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】Asthedocumentaryunfolded,showingtheplightoftheabandoneddogs,Isawmanyofthebikerswipingawaytears.(运用了as引导的时间状语从句和现在分词短语作状语和宾语补足语)5