高中英语考试读后续写公式

第一部分 语言描写一、正确使用标点符号(1)说话人+说话内容“说”后用逗号，引号内第一个字母大写，句尾标点符号放在引号内。Hesaid,“Youaremybestfriend!”(2) 说话内容+说话人陈述句引号内用逗号， 引号外第一个字母小写：疑问句或感叹句引号内用问号或感叹号， 引号外第一个字母小写。且“某人说”可以写作“sb.said”也可以写作“saidsb.”。①"Yes,"hesaid.②"Youmaybothgo,"saidAndy.③"Don'tmove,"shesaidtoMikeinasoftvoice.(3)说话内容+说话人+说话内容“某人说”可以写作“sb.said”也可以写作“saidsb.”:“某人说”前面引号内用逗号，引号外第一个字母小写。“某人说”后面如果用句号，则后面引号内第一个字母大写；“某人说”后面如果用逗号，则后面引号内第一个字母小写。①“That'scool,”hesaid.“CanIhaveatry?”②“You'dbetterletmego,”teasedhertwinbrother,William.“Therearedangersalloverthisplace.”,③“Youcangoanyplaceyouwant,”Amysaid,“butIthinkyou'llfindwhatyouneed.”二、避免重复使用 say在进行语言描写时很多同学全部都只用“said”这一个单词，这样使得句子重复呆板，因此要学会灵活多变的各种“说”。explain 解释state 陈述protest 抗议sob哭诉insist 坚持comfort安慰repeat 重复agree同意order命令scream 尖叫promise承诺whisper 耳语yell/shout 大叫declare 声称add 补充assure 保证complain 抱怨,apologise 道歉announce 宣告argue 争论interrupt 打断beg 请求demand 要求mock 嘲讽claim 声称cry/exclaim 喊叫suggest/advise 建议stammer/stutter/stumble 结巴ask/inquire 询问reply/answer/respond回答1.“Christine!照顾好你弟弟!”母亲高声喊道。“Christine!Takecareofyouryoungbrother!”Mothershoutedatthetopofhervoice.2.“Hannah，你知道她在哪儿吗?她怎么样?请告诉我。”他恳求道。"Hannah,doyouknowwheresheis?Howisshe?Pleasetellme."Hebegged.3.“报纸上有一个圣诞愿望竞赛。”Amy的妈妈宣布，“给圣诞老人写封信可能会得奖。”,“There'saChristmaswishcontestonthenewspaper,”Amy'smomannounced.“WritealettertoSanta,andyoumightwinaprize.”三、如何让对话更生动第一类“……,”sbsaidina…voice/tone.某人以…的声音、语气说到inapleasanttone/voice 以一种愉悦的声音/语气inafirmtone/voice以一种坚定的声音/语气inarudetone/voice以一种粗鲁的声音/语气inasadtone/voice 以一种悲伤的声音/语气也可以用 inavoice/toneof+名词的搭配inatone/voiceofsurprise 用一种惊讶的语气inatone/voiceofcuriosity 用一种好奇的语气inatone/voiceofimpatience 用一种不耐烦的语气inatone/voiceofcommand用一种命令的语气1.“你一定是安妮吧?”他用友好的语气说。“YoumustbeAnnie,”hesaidinafriendlytone.2.“我很乐意。”艾米莉用愉快的语气说。“Iwouldloveto.”saidEmilyinapleasanttone.3.“我不想和你一起去。”艾米丽用不耐烦的语气说。“Idon'twanttogowithyou.”saidEmilyinatoneofimpatience.,4.“不，我没有告诉他这个秘密。”他用低沉的语调说.“No,Ididn’ttellhimthesecret.”hesaidinalowtone.第二类“xxx,”sbsaidin/with+心情类名词.某人以…的心情说道……1.“Youaresafe,”Tomcriedwithexcitement.“你安全啦！”Tom激动地说道。2.“Ihateyou!”shescreamedinanger.“我讨厌你！”她生气地大喊道。3.“Whatalovelyrabbit,”Isaidinastonishment.“好可爱的兔子啊！”我诧异地说到。4.“Nicetomeetyou,”hesaidwithenthusiasm.“很高兴认识你。”他热情地说。第三类“xxx,”sbsaid+adv..+doing.(添加非谓语动词表达后续动作)1.“我去给我们拿点咖啡。”她温柔地说道，朝厨房走去。“I'llgetussomecoffee,”shesaidgently,headingforthekitchen.2.“我再也不相信你了。”他生气地大喊道，砰的一声关上门。“Idon'tbelieveyouanymore.”Heyelledangrily,slammingthedoor.3.“我被狼袭击了，我以为再也见不到你了。”麦克激动地说，紧紧抱住他们。,“IwasattackedbyawolfandIthoughtIwouldneverseeyouagain.”Mikesaidexcitedly.huggingthemtightly.第四类sbdidsth.didsthandsaid“xxx.”(添加动作链)1.他拦下出租车，提着行李箱跳上车，对司机说："请去警察局。"Hestoppedthetaxi,jumpedinwiththesuitcaseandtoldthedriver.“Gotothepolicestation,please.”2.她冲上前去，跪在地上，喃喃地说：“对不起，我的宝贝。”Shedashedforward.kneltdownandmurmured,"I'msorry,mybaby.”3.我匆忙穿上衣服，拿起包说：“请等一下我！”Iputonmyclotheshurriedly,grabbedmybagandsaid."Pleasewaitforme!"Translation1.“没人能理解我！”安迪哽咽着，双手掩面。“Nobodycouldunderstandme!”Andysobbed,buryinghisfaceinhishands.2.农夫抱起狗，跪下来，轻声说：“现在是你的了。”Thefarmerpickedupthedog,kneltdownandsaidinasoftvoice,“It'syoursnow.”3.她眼里噙着泪水说：“对不起。”Withtearsinhereves,shesaid,“Sorry.”,4.“嗨，兰迪。我对意大利面条的事感到抱歉。”凯瑟琳低声道歉，脸涨红了。“Hi,Landy.I'msorryaboutthespaghettithing.”Catherinemurmuredanapology,herfacereddening.5.“看！”罗斯指着窗户，激动地喊道。“Look!”Rosepointedoutthewindowandcriedingreatexcitement.6.“想试一下吗?”我抚摸着玛丽娜的手说。“Wanttotryoneon?”Isaid,touchingMarina'shand.7.我打开窗户对着对面喊道。“我知道我们以前见过面，但我不记得在哪里了。”。Iopenedmywindowandshoutedacross,“Iknowwe'vemetbefore,butIcan'trememberwhere.”8.“想试一下吗?”我抚摸着玛丽娜的手说。“Wanttotryoneon?”Isaid,touchingMarina'shand.第二部分结尾升华一、分类1、氛围结尾:floatedintheair/filled+地点/…wasbathedin“飘在空中/充满/沉浸在”(1)Thegoldensunlightstreamingin,laughterlingeredaroundtheyardandhappinessfloatedintheair.,(2)Withthecoolbreeze,thewholefamilywasbathedinhappinessandlove.2、拥抱哭泣对话法AhuggedBtightlywithtearsflowingdownone'scheeks,whispering...母亲给了我们每个人一个大大的拥抱，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来，在我们耳边低语：“谢谢你们的好意。是你的爱温暖了我们。Themotherhuggedustightlywithtearsflowingdownhercheeks,whisperinginourears,“Thankyouforyourkindness.It'syourlovethathaswarmedusup.”3.强调句:Itis+名词+that+谓语(count/matter/bring...)“正是…”正是爱和关怀使世界运转。Itisloveandcarethatmaketheworldgoaround.4.Fromthenon,“从那时起,……”从那时起，我总是尽可能地帮助别人。Fromthenon,Ialwaysgiveothersahelpinghandifpossible.从那时起，友谊在我们两人的心中绽放。Fromthenonfriendshipbloomedinbothofourhearts.5.Onlythendidsb.realizethat…“直到那时某人才意识到…”直到那时我才意识到，我们不应该把爱视为理所当然。OnlythendidIrealizedthatweshouldnevertakeloveforgranted.6.Itoccurredtosb.that…“某人突然想到…”,他突然想到，有了家人的爱，过生日就不再是烦恼了。Itoccurredtohimthatwithfamily'slove,itwasnolongerdisturbingtohavebirthday.7.Manyyearshavepassed,butIwillneverforget...“许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记…”许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记那份特别的礼物。Manyyearshave passed,butIwillneverforgetthespecialgift.8.Manyyearshavepassed,buttheexperienceisstilldeeplyengravedinone'smind.许多年过去了，但这段经历仍深深地铭刻在一个人的脑海里。9.Neverhadsb.donesth.“某人从来没有…”她从来没有这么骄傲过！Neverhadshebeensoproud!二、精彩结尾赏析亲情类1.TheMotherhuggedthetwinstightly,whispering,“Thisisthebestsurpriseintheworld!”2.OnlythendidIrealizedthathowmuchmymomlovedme.3.Itoccurredtomethatfamilyloveisthegreatestgiftinlife.,4.ItwasatthatmomentthatIhadafullunderstandingofthesignificanceoffamily.5.Itwasatthisverymomentthatthefrozenicebetweentwogenerations——melteddownintoawarmstreamflowingintotheirhearts.6.Theearlysunlightstreamingin,laughterlingeredaroundtheroomandhappinessfloatedintheair/thewholefamilywasbathedinhappinessandlove.7.Aftersomanyyears,thetasteofthecake,thelaughteroffriendsandtheembraceofmyparentsstilllingeredinmymind.=thetasteofthecake,thelaughteroffriendsandtheembraceofmyparentswerestilldeeplyengravedinmymind.8.Thisbirthdayisboundtobekeptinmymemoryforever,lighteningmyfuturepath.助人类1.有时候，我们小小的行动可以给别人带来很大的不同。Sometimesoursmallactioncanmakeagreatdifferencetoothers.2.许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记玛格丽特的圣诞礼物和她的善举。Manyyearshavepassed,butIwillneverforgetMargret's Christmasgiftsandheractofkindness.2.母亲给了我们每个人一个大大的拥抱，在我们的眼中低语：“谢谢你们的好意。是你的爱温暖了我们。”,Themothergaveeachofusabighug,whisperinginoureyes,“Thankyouforyourkindness.It'syourlovethathaswarmedusup.”3.我突然想到，一个简单的举动可以让世界变得更美好。Itoccurredtomethatasimpleactcouldmaketheworldsomuchbetter.5.虽然外面的风还在呼啸，但一股暖流涌上心头。Althoughthewindstillscreamedoutside,awarmcurrentroseinmyheart.个人成长类(逆境、积极向上)1.在你身上发生了什么并不重要，重要的是你如何应对。It'snotwhathappenstoyou,buthowyoureacttoitthatmatters.2.直面困难，努力。你终将制造奇迹。Bebrave,risetosetbacks,andmakeefforts.Youwillendupcreatingmiracles.3.恐惧缔造不了未来，但希望可以。Fearneverbuildsthefuture,buthopedoes.4.每个人都像一朵花，有的有香味，有的没有。只要你开花，就会有蜜蜂和蝴蝶。Everyoneislikeaflower,somehavingfragrance,butsomenot.Aslongasyoubloom,therewillbebeesandbutterflies.5.要把最坏的情况变成最好的情况，一个人应该采取行动。Tochangetheworstsituationintobest,oneshouldtakeactions.,6.正如谚语所说，永远不会失败。我要么赢，要么学习。Justasasayinggoes,“Neverlose.Ieitherwinorlearn.”7.成功之路并不平坦。它充满了挑战和困难。Thejourneytosuccessisnotsmooth.Itisfullofchallengesanddifficulties.个人成长类(梦想)1.这是真的：如果梦想足够大，事实并不重要。It'strue:Ifthedreamisbigenough,thefactsdon'tcount.2.任何一个有梦想，有勇气和毅力的人都会成功。Anyonewithadream,courageandpersistencewillbesuccessful.3.成为你可能成为的人永远都不晚。OnlythendidIrealizedthatit'snevertoolatetobeallyoucanpossiblybe.4.人类历史上最伟大的发现是一个人可以通过改变他的态度来改变他的未来。Thegreatestdiscoveryofalltimeisthatapersoncanchangehisfuturebymerelychanginghisattitude.5.你无法控制他人的行为，但你可以选择如何应对。Youcannotcontrolthebehaviorofothers,butyoucanalwayschoosehowyourespondtoit.脱险类1.多么死里逃生啊！,Whatanarrowescape!2.每当我回想起那次惊心动魄的经历，我仍然会感到一种强烈的恐惧感。IwouldstillfeelastrongsenseoffearwheneverIlookedbackonthethrillingexperience.3.事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，任何困境都是有出路的。Itturnedoutthatthereisalwaysawayoutofanydifficultsituationsaslongaswestaycalm.4.我从来没有陷入过这样危险的境地。这段经历深深地刻在了我的脑海里，提醒我要尊重自然。NeverhadIfallenintosuchadangeroussituation.Theexperiencewasdeeplyengravedinmymindandremindedmetorespectthenature.