高中英语2025届高考读后续写人间真情类话题写作素材（描写佳句 升华主题 真题链接）

高考英语读后续写人间真情类话题写作素材一、描写佳句与亲情相关的冲突及解决场面描写1.Thatday,Iwalkedhomewithmyfather.Thesettingsunshoneonus,castingourshadowsontheroad.Wetalkedalotthatday,anditseemedthatthejourneyfromhometoschoolhadalsobeenshortened.那天，我和父亲一起步行回家。夕阳照在我们身上，把我们的影子投在路上。那天我们聊了很多，从家到学校的路似乎也变短了。2.“Whyareyousohardonme?”Ishoutedatmum,slammingthedoor.Ithrewmyselfontomybedandsobbed.“你为什么对我这么苛刻？”我冲着妈妈大喊，砰的一声关上了门。我扑倒在床上，抽泣起来。3.ThefaulthadbeenmainlyonRichard’ssidebuthewastoostubborntoadmitit.主要是理查德错了，但他太固执了而没有承认。与亲情相关的动作、神态和情感描写1.Jimdiscoveredtherewasnodisappointmentinhisfather’seyesbutonlyprideandlove.吉姆发现父亲的眼里没有失望，只有骄傲和爱。2.Whentheirmothersawthedeliciousbreakfast,asparkofsurpriseflashedacrossherface.当他们的母亲看到美味的早餐时，她的脸上闪过一丝惊喜。3.Samsobbedandsprangoutofhisbedtogivemeahug.山姆抽泣着从床上跳起来拥抱我。二、升华主题1.Igottoknowmydadbetterandlearnedtolovehimmore,makingtoughtimesmoremanageableandlifesweeter.我更好地了解我的父亲并且学会了更爱他，这让困难的事情变得更容易处理，生活更甜蜜。2.EverytimeIfacedchallenges,athoughtofgivingupflashedinmymind,butthesupportofmyfamilygavemethestrengthtokeepgoing.每次面对挑战，我都想放弃，但是家人的支持给了我继续前进的力量。3.ItwasHenry’skindnessthatmademefeelthewarmthofourfamily.Iwilltreasureitwithallmyheart.正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。4.ItwasthenthatIcametotherealizationthat……就在那时，我意识到，家人不是由于血缘而是因为爱联结在一起。5.Familiesareconnectednotbybloodbutbylove.家人不是由于血缘而是因为爱联结在一起。6.Atthesametime,allofthemlaughedwithexcitement,thelaughter.与此同时，他们都兴奋的笑了起来，笑声回荡在房间里。7.Althoughwearenotbloodrelatives,thetiebetweenusisevenstrongerthanthat.虽然我们不是血亲，但我们之间的关系甚至比那更紧密。8.Radiantlaughterburstoutfromtheroomconstantly,andthewholefamilysurroundedbyintensehappiness.房间里不断传出灿烂的笑声，整个家庭包围在强烈的幸福中。9.Thinkingback,Bencongratulatedhimselfonmakingtherightdecision,whichwastaughtbyhismotherwithseveralchocolates.回想起来，Ben庆幸自己做出了正确的决定，这是他母亲用几块巧克力教给他的。10.Iputmyrightarmaroundhisneck,andwelaughtertogether.Wearetruefamilynow.我用右臂搂住他的脖子，我们一起笑，我们现在是真正的家庭。11.Hewillcherishtheloveandwarmthoflife.--cherisheverylittleshiningsea3 shellinhisheart.他会珍惜生命的爱和温暖-珍惜他心中每一颗闪闪发光的贝壳12.Fromthenon,Icametoknowatruth---thestringknotontheskirtcouldgountiedbutthefamilybondwillneverbreak.从那时起，我明白了一个道理--家庭的联结永远不会散开。三、真题再现阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared._______________Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup._________________【答案】Paragraph1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Knowingwhattheywerepreparingfor,hewasgreatlysurprised.Soimmediately,heofferedtogetinvolvedinthekids’job.Firstly,heputthepotofporridgeonagentleheat,askingJefftowatchoutforitgoingforfifteenminutes.Andthen,heaskedJennatobreakanothertwoeggsandmixthemwithmilk.Withallpreparationsdone,theystartedtofrybreadtogether.Inaflash,sweetsmellfilledtheairinthekitchen.Totheirdelight,thebreakfastwasasuccessintheend.Paragraph1:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Eyesopened,thewomanheardaharmonious“HappyMother’sDay”fromhertwinkidswithhot,sweetbreakfastbeforeher.Behindthechildrenstoodtheirfather.Toshedlightonthegameofthegift,hetoldthemotherthewholestory.Afterlearningaboutwhathappened,she3 rosequicklytogazeattheboy’shandwithmovedtearsrollingdownhercheeks.“Thankyou,myhoney!”saidthemother.【语篇解读】本文是一篇记叙文。本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述的是Jenna和Jeff这对双胞胎兄妹为了在母亲节早上给母亲惊喜而精心策划并制作早餐的故事；Jenna和Jeff自己动手，做起饭餐来，不幸的是，他们连连失败；但是他们克服困难，永不放弃，折射的是他们对母亲的拳拳之爱的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。②由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。2.续写线索：指导——积极——献礼——感动3.词汇激活行为类①帮助：help/assist②完成：finish/complete③拥抱：hug/embrace情绪类①高兴：happy/delighted②感动：moved/touched【点睛】[高分句型1]Fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Itwasnotonlythebreakfast,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.(固定短语notonly…but(also)和强调句型)3