高中英语2025届高考应用文写作高分策略 (共四类)
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应用文写作高分策略一、善用举例1.suchas.../like...此外,还会定期举办各种英语活动。Inaddition,allkindsofEnglishactivitieswillbeheldregularly,suchasEnglishSpeechCompetition,EnglishDebateContestandsoon.(2023·枣庄高三二模)2.forexample/instance如今,我们中的一些人在校园里养成了一些坏习惯。Nowadays,someofushaveformedsomebadhabitsoncampus.Forinstance,somestudentsleavethelightsoninthedaytime;someleavemuchfoodonthetableaftereating.3.including...我们将组织一系列的活动。Wewillorganizearangeofactivities,includingperformancesontraditionalChinesemusicalinstruments,folkdancesaswellasChinesemartialarts.(2023·辽宁名校联盟3月适应性测试)二、适度增加【增加状语成分】1.增加目的状语1)我们学校将举行一场中国民间舞蹈表演。Inordertoenrichthecampuslifeofinternationalstudents,aChinesefolkdanceperformancewillbegiveninourschool.(2023·辽宁名校联盟2月质量检测)2)此外,练习你的汉语口语。Furthermore,practiceyourspokenChinesesothatyoucanexpressyourselfmoreclearlyandfluently.(2023·鞍山第二次监测)2.增加结果状语1)此外,我的英语很好。Moreover,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,enablingmetocommunicatewithforeignguestssmoothly.(2023·长郡中学模拟试卷一)2)将安排一系列与环保相关的讲座。Aseriesoflecturesrelatedtoenvironmentalprotectionwillbearranged,thusarousingpeople’sawarenessoflivingalow-carbonlife.(2023·济宁三模)3.增加伴随状语所有的家庭成员围坐在桌子旁。Allfamilymemberswouldsitaroundthetable,tastingdeliciousdumplings,watchingperformancesandchattinghappily.(2023·淄博高三一模)4.增加时间状语她总是耐心地帮助我。ShealwayshelpsmepatientlyeverytimeIhavedifficultyinlearningEnglish.(2023·阜阳高三3月质量检测)5.增加原因状语我认为我适合这项职位。IthinkI’mqualifiedforthepositionbecauseIhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,especiallywrittenEnglish.(2023·阜阳高三3月质量检测)6.增加方式状语bydoing...,...首先,每个人都有机会展示他们对这本书的理解。5
Firstly,everyonewillhavethechancetoshowtheirunderstandingofthebookbyparticipatinginthefreediscussions.(2023·福建4月联合测评)7.增加with复合结构作状语我们学校安排了一系列活动。WiththeWorldHeritageDayapproaching,ourschoolhasarrangedarangeofactivities.(2023·石家庄教学质量检测二)【增加定语成分】1.介绍名人故事世界著名人物的故事对我也很有吸引力。Thestoriesofworld-famouspeoplearealsoattractivetome,whichhelpsmelearnalotfromthem.2.介绍活动为了使我们的学校更有吸引力,创造一个更好的环境,学生会组织了这次活动。Aimingtomakeourschoolmoreattractiveandcreateabetterenvironment,theStudents’Unionorganizedtheactivity,whichtookplaceonSaturdayafternoon.(2023·抚顺普通高中高三模拟)【增加个人感受】虽然这个暑假我觉得很累,但我为我所做的事情感到很高兴。AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholiday,IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdidbecauseIgotaknowledgeoffarmingexperience.【增加评价】我想这样的活动是必要的和有意义的。Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful,fromwhichIlearnthatweshouldhelppeoplewhoareintroubleifpossible.【增加希望】我们的操场能变得更加干净整洁。Ihopethatwitheveryone’sefforts,ourplaygroundcanbecomemuchcleanerandtidier.(2023·安徽省名校联盟高三4月联考)【增加倡议】我从这次经历中学到的是,爱护和保护我们的社区是我们的责任。WhatIlearntfromthisexperienceisthatitisourdutytoloveandprotectourcommunity.Sothechairmanofourschoolrecommendsourschoolholdaseriesofactivitiestocallonstudentstotakeactiontodoit.【增加相关细节】1.Aimingtopromoteourunderstandingandpassionforlabour,ourschoolisorganizinganactivityonline,whichisscheduledtobeginonMay1standlasttwoweeks.(增加分词作状语,定语从句)(2023·湖北省高三第二次模拟)为了提高我们对劳动的理解和热情,我们学校正在组织一项在线活动,定于5月1日开始,活动持续两周。2.You’dbetterworkoutregularlysothatyoucankeepfitandhealthyandmoreimportantly,moreenergetic.(增加sothat引导的目的状语从句)(2023·辽宁二模)你最好定期锻炼,这样你才能保持身体健康,更重要的是,更有活力。3.NotonlydidthevolunteerworkbroadenmyhorizonsbutitalsomademeproudofmyselfforplayingapartintheOlympicGames.(增加个人感受,倒装)(2023·抚顺模拟)志愿者工作不仅开阔了我的视野,也让我为自己能在奥运会上发挥作用而感到自豪。4.Duetosocialandeconomicdevelopment,humanbeingshavedamagedtheenvironmentseriously,andwearefacedwithseriousproblemslikeglobalwarmingandfrequentnaturaldisasters.(dueto表示原因,like表示列举)5
(2023·山东省新高考联合模拟)由于社会和经济的发展,人类对环境造成了严重破坏,我们面临着诸如全球变暖和频繁的自然灾害等严重问题。5.SinceIwatchedtheWinterOlympicGamesinBeijing,Ihavebeeninlovewithskating.(增加since引导的时间状语从句)(2023·梅州高三二模)自从我看了北京冬奥会之后,我就爱上了滑冰。6.Knowingthatyouwon’tbeabletogobackhomeduringtheSpringFestival,Iamwritingtoinviteyoutospenditwithmyfamily,whowillbemorethanhappytowelcomeyou.(增加分词作状语,定语从句)我知道春节期间你将不能回家,所以我写信请你和我的家人一起过春节,他们将非常高兴地欢迎你。7.Asscheduled,wearegoingtohaveapicnicontheriverside,thusgivingyouachancetohaveatasteofChinesecuisine.(增加分词作状语,表示结果)按计划,我们将在河边野餐,让您有机会品尝中国美食。8.Second,itisagoodideatobringasmallgift,suchasabunchofflowersoraboxofchocolateiftheyhaveyoungchildren.(增加suchas短语,表示举例说明)其次,如果他们有年幼的孩子,带一束花或一盒巧克力等小礼物是个好主意。三、亮化词汇【求新求变】1.ThosewhochoosetoreadEnglishbooksandvisitEnglishlearningwebsitesonlymakeup18%and12%respectively.(2022·全国乙卷)→ThosewhochoosetoreadEnglishbooksandvisitEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%respectively.2.WiththewidespreadoftheInternet,moreandmorepeoplebecomeonlinelearners.(2021·全国乙卷)→WiththewidespreadoftheInternet,anincreasingnumberofpeoplebecomeonlinelearners.【求准求精】1.Inconclusion,weshouldfindawaytostudyonlinebetter.(2021·全国乙卷)→Inconclusion,weshouldfindawaytostudyonlinemoreefficiently.2.TheWorldOceansDaywassetuptoraisepeople’sawarenessofprotectingtheoceans,whichplayedanimportantpartinglobalecosystem.(2022·全国甲卷)→TheWorldOceansDaywassetuptoraisepeople’sawarenessofprotectingtheoceans,whichplayedasignificant/crucialpartinglobalecosystem.【短语优先】1.Ibelievethatyourarrivalwillbeimportanttoourshow.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)→Iholdthefirmbeliefthatyourarrivalwillbeofgreatsignificancetoourshow.2.However,frommypointofview,whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,foritcanhelpstudentsunderstandEnglishbetter.(2022·全国乙卷)→However,frommypointofview,whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,foritcanhelpstudentsgainadeeperunderstandingof/adeeperinsightintoEnglish.3.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermyinvitation.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)→Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyinvitationintoconsideration/account.4.Asisshownbythefiguresofthechart,thankstomoderntechnology,manywaysareavailableforstudentstopolishtheirEnglish.(2022·全国乙卷)5
→Asisshownbythefiguresofthechart,thankstomoderntechnology,awiderangeof/varietiesofwaysareavailableforstudentstopolishtheirEnglish.四、衔接过渡【用于“启”的过渡词语】asyouknow,asisshowninthe...,generallyspeaking,firstofall,tobeginwith,foronething,aboveall,ontheonehand,tostartwith,asisknowntous等。1.Asisknowntous,treesareverysignificanttotheenvironmentandhumans.(2023·大庆二模)众所周知,树木对环境和人类都非常重要。2.Firstofall,youshouldkeepcalmwhenevermeetingwithsomethingunpleasant.首先,遇到不愉快的事情时,你应该保持冷静。3.Asisshownabove,therearetwocartoonspresentingtwoquitedifferentsituations.正如上面所示,这两幅漫画描述了两种完全不同的情景。【用于“承”的过渡词语】secondly,also,inaddition,additionally,besides,plus,moreover,foranotherthing,forthispurpose,furthermore,what’smore,forexample,inotherwords,infact,atthesametime,asaresult,therefore,meanwhile等。1.What’smore,wecandevelopourunderstandingofthedifferencesbetweentheeasternandwesterncultures.(2023·枣庄二模)此外,我们还可以加深对东西方文化差异的理解。2.Therefore,studentsshouldsparemoretimeforEnglishreadingratherthanwatchingmoviesorlisteningtomusictoomuch.(2022·全国乙卷)因此,学生应该腾出更多的时间阅读英语,而不是过多地看电影或听音乐。3.Secondly,howAItechnologycanbeappliedtoandaffecttomorrow’seducationwillbefurtherexplained.(2023·合肥第二次质量检测)其次,将进一步解释人工智能技术如何应用于并影响未来的教育。4.Meanwhile,alltheaudienceweretouchedbyhisperseverancedeeplyandapplaudedwarmly.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)同时,全场观众都被他的毅力深深打动,报以热烈的掌声。5.Furthermore,itisnecessaryforyoutotakeagoodrest,whichwillprovideenoughenergyforyou.此外,你有必要好好休息,这将为你提供足够的能量。6.Inaddition,heservedasavisitingprofessoratseveralAmericanuniversities.除此之外,他还是几所美国大学的客座教授。【用于“转”的过渡词语】afterall,but,however,onthecontrary,incontrast,otherwise,while,though,despite,inspiteof,allthesame,asamatteroffact,nevertheless等。1.However,hesparednoefforttocatchupwiththeothers,dropsofsweatstreamingdownhischeeks,showingnosignofgivingup.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)然而,他不遗余力地追赶其他人,汗水顺着脸颊流下,丝毫没有放弃的迹象。2.Itisreallyamazingthat,despitetheculturaldifferences,weactuallyliveinthesameworld.(2022·浙江1月卷)令人惊讶的是,尽管存在文化差异,但我们实际上生活在同一个世界里。3.Asamatteroffact,Ibelieveinyouwhatevertheresultwillbe!事实上,无论结果如何,我都相信你!【用于“合”的过渡词语】inaword,finally,atlast,inshort,intheend,inconclusion,onthewhole,insummary,tosumup,toputitinanutshell等。1.Tosumup,thankyouforyourattendance,andIwishyouallameaningfulandenjoyableexperience.(2023·杭州高三二模)5
总之,感谢大家的参与,并祝大家有一个有意义和愉快的经历。2.Inconclusion,facingdifficultieswithcourageanddeterminationisessentialforpersonalgrowthandsuccess.(2023·辽宁省重点高中联合体二模)总之,以勇气和决心面对困难对个人成长和成功至关重要。3.Allinall,let’sacttogethernowtostrengthenourphysicalhealthandcreateabetterlife.(2023·济南高三3月模拟)总而言之,让我们现在一起行动起来,强身健体,创造更美好的生活。5
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