高中英语2026届高考读后续写动作链句型结构和高分佳句

高考英语读后续写动作链句型结构和高分佳句一、两个连续动作的句型结构1.基本结构(1)动作A-ed+and+动作B-edThedogwaggeditstailandboundedtowarditsowner.那只狗摇着尾巴，朝着它的主人蹦蹦跳跳地跑去。（摇尾巴→蹦蹦跳跳地跑）Hegrabbedtheropeandpulledwithallhisstrength.他抓住绳子，用尽全力拉扯。（抓住→拉扯）(2)动作A-ed+and+表情-ed/语言-ed/心理状态-edShebrushedawaytearsandforcedasmile.她擦去眼泪，挤出一丝微笑。(擦眼泪→挤出微笑)Myheartskippedabeatanddisbeliefwashedoverme.我的心猛地一沉，难以置信的感觉涌上心头。（心颤→情绪涌来）Sheshruggedandspreadherhandswideinresignation.“That’sallIcantellyourightnow.”她耸了耸肩，无奈地摊开双手说：“现在我只能告诉你这些了。”（耸肩→摊开手）【高分佳句】1.她弯下腰捡起掉落的书。(弯腰→捡起)Shebentdownandpickedupthefallenbook.2.我的心脏狂跳着，双腿颤抖着。(心跳→腿颤)Myheartbeatwildlyandmylegstrembled.3.他凝视着周围一片混乱，感到一阵绝望。(凝视→感到绝望)Hegazedattheconfusionaroundhimandwasoverwhelmedbyafeelingofdespair.4.她感到精疲力竭，坐在溪边休息着疼痛的双脚。(感到疲惫→坐下)Shefeltexhaustedandsatbythestreamrestingherachingfeet.5.斯蒂芬妮睁大棕色的眼睛看着他，温柔地说：“我原谅你。”(看→说)Stephanielookedathimwithwidebrowneyesandgentlysaid“Iforgiveyou.”6.我盯着烤箱，心一沉。整齐的小球融化了，溢出了烤盘的边缘。(盯着→心一沉)Istaredintotheoven,andmyheartsank.Theneat,littleballshadmeltedandoverflowedtotheedgesofthecookiesheet.7."里面怎么样了？"爸爸从客厅打来电话。凯莱布扬起眉毛，咬着嘴唇。(扬眉→咬唇)“How’sitgoinginthere?”Dadcalledfromthelivingroom.Calebraisedhiseyebrowsandbithislip8.她喉咙发紧，使劲咽了一下口水。(喉咙紧→咽口水)Herthroattightenedandsheswallowedhard.9.他站了一会儿，吓得僵住了。(站→僵住)Hestoodstillforamoment,frozeninfear/shock.10.他用力伸出双手，牢牢地抓住横杆。(伸手→抓住)Hestretchedhishandsvigorouslyandgraspedthehorizontalbarfirmly.11.突然她发出了一声低沉、令人窒息的呻吟，身体开始剧烈地抖动。(发出呻吟→身体抖动)6,Suddenlyshegavealow,chokingmoanandbegantotrembleviolently.2.高级结构(1)非谓语动词①动作A-ed,+动作/表情/语言/心理状态B-ing/-edIranbacktothecamp,stumblingahundredtimeinmyhaste.我跑回营地，匆忙中跌跌撞撞了一百次。(跑→撞)Shetiptoedintotheroom,holdingherbreath.她踮着脚走进房间，屏住呼吸。(踮脚→屏住呼吸)Herushedforward,hugginghertightly.他冲上前，紧紧抱住她。(冲→抱住)Sheflungherarmsaroundherfriend,laughingwildly.她张开双臂抱住朋友，放声大笑。(抱住→笑)Feelingdesperate,Evastartedusingamindtrickonherself.感到绝望的伊娃开始对自己使用心术。（感到绝望→开始使用）②Having动作-ed,+动作-edHavingwalkedforquitealongtime,shefoundherselflost.走了很长时间后，她发现自己迷路了。(走→发现迷路)Havingexperiencedsomanyfailuresoneafteranother,shefinallypickedherselfup.经历了一次又一次的失败后，她终于重新振作起来。(经历失败→振作)【高分佳句】①动作-ed,+动作/表情/语言/心理状态-ing/-ed1.她抱紧双膝，前后摇晃。(抱→摇)Shehuggedherknees,rockingbackandforth2.她跳了起来，兴奋地欢呼。(跳→欢呼)Shejumpedup,exclaimingwithextremethrill.3.他拍拍她的头，用温和的声音安慰。(拍→说)Hepattedherhead,sayinginagentlevoice.4.他反复咆哮，打破了寂静。(咆哮→打破)Heroaredrepeatedly,shatteringwhatwasleftofsilence.5.他握紧拳头，气得发抖。(握紧→发抖)Heclenchedhisfists,tremblingwithanger.6.婴儿伸出双臂，要求被抱起来。(伸出→要求)Thebabystretchedoutitsarms,demandingtobeheld.7.“当然有圣诞老人啊”,妈妈说道,一边用手指拨弄着我的头发。(说→拨弄)"Ofcourse,thereisaSantaClause."momsaid,strokingherfingersthroughmyhair.8.她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。(颤抖→感觉)Sheshookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.9.爱德华双手冒汗，拿着球，紧张地站在球场上。(拿着→站在)Edwardheldtheballwithsweatyhands,standingonthecourtnervously.练习二、根据中文翻译，运用给出的非谓语动词句型，完成句子。②Having动作-ed,+动作-ed1.走了很长时间后，她发现自己迷路了。(走→发现迷路)Havingwalkedforquitealongtime,shefoundherselflost.2.经历了一次又一次的失败后，她终于重新振作起来。(经历失败→振作)Havingexperiencedsomanyfailuresoneafteranother,shefinallypickedherselfup.3.排了3个小时的队后，他被告知票已经卖完了。(排队→被告知买完)6,Havingqueuedfor3hours，hewastoldthatthetickethadbeensoldout.(2)独立主格①动作/表情/语言/心理状态A-ing,+动作B-edLaughterlingeringintheroom,theirpreciousfriendshipblossomedinthesummerlikeaflowerthatneverfades.伴随着笑声回荡在房间里，他们珍贵的友谊之花盛开在这个夏季，永不凋败。(笑声回荡→友谊绽放)②动作A-ed,表情/语言/心理状态B-ingHethumbedup,smileblossomingonhisface.他竖起大拇指，脸上绽放笑容。(竖起大拇指→绽放笑容)“Pleasedtomakeyouracquaintance,”hegreetedwithabroadsmile,hisvoicebrimmingwithenthusiasm.(笑着问候→声音充满)“很高兴认识你，”他满脸笑意，声音里充满了热情。【高分佳句】1.他打开信，心在咚咚跳着。(打开心→心跳)Heunfoldedtheletter,hisheartracing.2.她紧紧地闭上眼睛，双手捂着脸。(闭眼→手捂脸)Sheclosedhereyestightly,herhandscoveringherface.3.宝拉的脸涨得通红，她的声音因兴奋而颤抖。(脸通红→声音颤抖)Paula’sfaceflushed,hervoicequiveringwithexcitement.4.她慢慢走近，眼神逐渐有光。(走进→眼睛有光)Shesteppedcloser,eyesgraduallyglittering.5.他盯着那只野兽，他的心怦怦直跳，他觉得它要从胸腔里跳出来了。(盯着野兽→心跳)Hestaredatthebeast,hisheartpoundingsohardthathethoughtitwouldbreakthroughhischest.(3)with复合结构①动作A-ed,+with动作B-ed/动作B-ingTheoldmanlayonthebench,withhisfacecoveredbyanewspaper.这位老人躺在长凳上,脸上盖着一张报纸。(躺→脸盖着)Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。(转过身→眼里恐惧)②with动作A-ing，+动作B-edWithtremblinghands,heunfoldedtheletter.他颤抖着双手打开信。(手颤抖→打开)Withnobodynoticingme,Iputthemoneyonthetable.没人注意我，我把钱放在桌子上。(没人注意→我放置)【高分佳句】1.绝望而无助的她跪了下来，悔恨的泪水顺着面颊流了下来。(跪下→流泪)Desperateandhelpless,shekneltdown,withtearsofregretstreamingdownhercheeks.2.因为我鼻子的阻挡,每个角度都尝试失败了,我满是悔恨和懊恼。(尝试失败→情绪压倒)Witheveryangletriedinvainformynoseprevention,Iwasoverwhelmedbyafeelingofextremeregretandannoyance.3.听着爱德华那番鼓舞人心的话语在脑海中回荡，莱昂渐渐平静下来，全神贯注地投入到问题的思考之中。(他人鼓舞→我平静，专注)WithEdward‘sencouragingwordsechoinginhismind,Leoncalmeddownandburiedhimselfinthequestions.6,二、三个及以上连续动作的句型结构1.基本结构:（1）动作A-ed,+动作B-ed+and+动作C-edTheboysrushedtothelake，tookofftheirclothesandjumpedintothewater.男孩们冲到湖边，脱下衣服跳进水里。(动作链：冲到湖边→脱衣服→跳水)Thesingerglancedattheaudience，tookadeepbreathandbegantosing.歌手瞥了一眼观众，深吸了一口气，开始唱歌。(动作链：瞥了一眼观众→深吸了一口气→唱歌)Thechildtripped,droppedhisicecream,andburstintotears.孩子绊了一跤，冰淇淋掉了，哇的一声哭起来。(动作链：绊了一跤→东西掉了→哭起来)(2)动作A-ed,+动作B-ed+表情-ed/语言-ed/心理状态-edHestoppedthetaxi,jumpedinwiththesuitcaseandtoldthedriver,“Gotothepolicestation,please."他拦下了出租车,拿起箱子跳进车里,然后对司机说:“请到警察局去。”(动作链：拦下出租车→跳进车里→对司机说)Beckyslowlystoodup,murmuredseveralsoothingwords,andcastsomelingeringglances.贝基慢慢地站了起来，喃喃地说了几句安慰话，又瞟了几眼。(动作链：站起来→说了几句→瞟了几眼)Hismouthbecamedry,hiseyeswidened,andhebegantotrembleallover.他嘴巴干涩，眼睛睁大，而且开始全身发抖。(动作链：嘴巴干涩→眼睛睁大→全身发抖)【高分佳句】1他在牛仔裤上擦擦汗湿的手掌，深吸一口气，走上舞台。(擦汗→深呼吸→走)Hewipedhissweatypalmsonhisjeans,tookadeepbreath,andsteppedontothestage.2.她拿起电话拨号，屏住了呼吸。(拿起电话→拨号→屏住呼吸)Shepickedupthephone,dialedthenumber,andheldherbreath.3.他抓起外套冲出门，消失在夜色中。(抓起外套→冲出门→消失)Hegrabbedhiscoat,dashedoutthedoor,anddisappearedintothenight.4.她握紧拳头，皱着眉头，怒视着斯科特。(握拳→皱眉→怒视)Sheclenchedherfist,knittedhereyebrowsandglaredatScott.5.她走到我身边，眼睛里的光线暗了下来，喃喃地说：“我失败了。”(走来→眼神暗淡→说)Shewalkedtome,thelightinhereyesdarkened,andmurmured,“Ifailed.”6.他愤怒得脸色阴沉，冲出阳台怒视我们，质问“我的花怎么了？”(愤怒→冲出→怒视→质问)Hisfacecloudedwithanger,hestormedoutofthebalconyandglaredatus,questioning“Whathappenedtomyflowers?”7.农夫轻轻抱起小狗，跪了下来，轻声说道：“它现在是你的责任了。”(抱起→跪下→轻声说)Thefarmercradledthesmalldogtenderly,kneltdown,andwhisperedsoftly,“It’syourresponsibilitynow.”8.他深吸了一口气，推开前门，溜了进去。(深吸气→推门→溜进去)Hetookadeepbreath,pushedasidethefronddoor,andslippedin.9.贝基慢慢地站了起来，喃喃地说了几句安慰话，又瞟了几眼。(站起来→说了几句→瞟了几眼)Beckyslowlystoodup,murmuredseveralsoothingwords,andcastsomelingeringglances.6,2.高级结构：(1)非谓语动词①动作A-ing,+动作B-ed,+and动作C-edTyinghershoelacestightly,sheadjustedherbackpack,andstartedthemountainclimb.她系紧鞋带，调整背包，开始登山。(动作链：系鞋带→调背包→登山)Hearingthebadnews,Marryfaintedawayonthespotandfellintounconsciousness.听到这个坏消息，玛丽当场昏倒，失去了知觉。(动作链：听到消息→昏倒→失去知觉)②动作A-ed,+and动作B-ed,+动作C-ingPoppytrottedtohimandgotuponhisbacklegs，tryingtolickhisoldfriend.小狗波比小跑到他跟前，站立起来，要舔他的老朋友。(动作链：小狗跳→站立→舔)Shefeltexhaustedandsatbythestream,restingherachingfeet.她感到累极了,坐在溪边,让疼痛的双脚放松一下。(动作链：感到累→坐下→放松脚)③动作A-ed,+动作B-ing,+and动作C-ingShelistenedwithcloseattention,bitingherlipsandstaringatthefloor.她聚精会神地听着,咬着嘴唇,眼睛盯着地板。(动作链：听→咬嘴→盯着)Theoldmansatunderthesunset,readingthenewspaperandlisteningtotheradio.老人坐在夕阳下，看着报纸，听着收音机。(动作链：坐→看→听)④动作A-ed,+动作B-ing,+动作C-edHestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks,whilethemusicplayed.音乐响起时，他静静地站着，眼泪顺着脸颊滚落下来。(动作链：站→流泪→当音乐响起)⑤动作A-ing,+动作B-ed,+动作C-ingOpeningthedoorquietly,shetiptoedintotheroom,holdingherbreath.她轻轻推开门，屏住呼吸踮脚走进房间。(动作链：开门→踮脚走→屏住呼吸)【高分佳句】1.在街上漫无目的地逛了几个小时后，她觉得有点饿了，想吃点东西。(闲逛→感觉饿了→想吃)Havingwonderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.2.说出真相后，他心里轻松了很多，心情放松地回家了。(说出来→心里轻松→回家)Havingtoldthetruth,hewasrelievedandwenthomewitharelaxedmood.3.托尼毫不犹豫地冲向罗斯，紧紧地抱住她，帮她擦去脸颊上的泪水。(冲向→抱住→擦泪)TonyrushedtoRoseandthrewhisarmsaroundhertightlywithouthesitation，wipingtearsfromhercheeks.4.听到这个坏消息，玛丽震惊得僵住了，仿佛在地上扎了根。(听到→震惊僵住→站住不动)Hearingthebadnews,Maryfrozewithshock,asifrootedontheground.5.罗西太太惊讶地扬起眉毛，僵住了，仿佛在地上扎了根一样一动不动。(惊讶地扬眉→僵住→站住不动)Raisinghereyebrowsinsurprise,MrsRossifroze,asifrootedontheground.(2)独立主格动作A-ing+and+动作B-ing,主语+动作C-ed6,Herlegstremblingandhisheartbeatingnearlyoutofherchest,Jennywalkedslowlytothefront.杰妮慢慢走向前台，腿发抖，心都要跳出来了。(腿抖→心跳→走向前)动作A-ing,+动作B-ed+and+动作C-edThenightfalling,theyputupatentandwolfeddownasimplifieddinner.夜幕降临，他们支起帐篷，快速地吃了个便饭。(夜幕降临→支起帐篷→迅速吃)(3)With复合结构动作A-ed,+动作B-ed,+with动作C-ed/ingSoonEvabegantobreathehard,withherheartpoundingandlegsshaking.不久，伊娃开始呼吸困难，心跳加速，双腿颤抖。(呼吸困难→心跳加速→双腿颤抖)Withnopreviousrollingeyes,Calebcouldn'tresistthetemptationandalsoreachedforaone.没有之前的翻白眼，凯莱布无法抗拒诱惑，也伸手拿了一个。(翻白眼→忍不住→伸手拿)【高分佳句】1.显然，斯科特吓坏了，站在原地不动，额头冒汗，脸色苍白。(吓坏→站在原地→额冒汗脸苍白)Evidently,Scottwasscared,rootedtothespot,withhisforeheadsweatyandhisfacepale.2.运动员快速助跑，高高跃起，身体优美地划过一道弧线。(快速跑→跳高→身体弧线)Theathletetookaquickrun-up,jumpedhighintotheair,hisbodyarcinggracefully.3.南瓜放在桌子上，我俯身过去，把头挤进开口处。(放在→我俯身，把头挤进)Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.6