高中英语2026届高考读后续写高分素材（语言描写 “动作链”描写）

读后续写高分素材一、语言描写（一）“各种各样的说”1.单词【第1类】轻声说whisper（低声说出）常指耳语、窃窃私语murmur/mutter（喃喃自语）多指别人不易听到的低语gossip小声地悄悄地传开，八卦moan/complain/grumble抱怨着说mumble/grunt咕哝comfort安慰说【第2类】大声说call喊叫cry叫喊shout呼喊scream惊吓地尖叫yell喊叫着说roar咆哮growl低沉地怒吼exclaim惊叫【第3类】建议说advise/propose/suggest/offer/recommend建议argue认为caution/warn警告【第4类】权威说announce/declare宣布claim/state声称order命令【第5类】问与答ask/inquire/enquire询问reply/answer/respond回答【第6类】结巴地说stammer/stutter/stumble结结巴巴地说【第7类】其他“说”add补充说道=continue继续说道retort反驳道explain解释道state陈述道protest抗议道sob哭诉道agree同意地说comfort安慰道promise承诺道assure保证道insist坚持说7 repeat重复地说gasp气喘吁吁地说chorus齐声说groan呻吟着说2.高级词块withasmile笑着withabsolutecertainty斩钉截铁地withfalseenthusiasm故作热情地withgreatseriousness特别严肃地withsuddenresolution突然坚决地speakwithpassion充满激情地说inalowtone/voice低声地inasoft/gentle/mildtone用温柔的语气说inasoftvoice以温柔的口吻inanexcited/angryvoice以兴奋/生气的口吻inawhisper低声说insurprise惊奇地throughgrittedteeth咬牙切齿地mutterbetweenteeth低声含糊地说roarwithlaughter大笑着说letoutascreamofhorror发出恐惧的尖叫wordsofcomfort安慰的话utteracryofjoy/grief发出快乐/悲痛的叫声3.句子1.Hearingthis,thetreesmiledwithrelief,adding,“Mydyingtrunkistherightoneforyou.Pleasecomehereandhaveaseat.”听见这话，树如释重负地笑了，补充道："我枯死的树干正适合你。请过来坐吧。"2.Omargroanedwithpain,openedhiseyes,andsaid:"What’sthematter,son?"奥马尔痛苦地呻吟着睁开眼问道："孩子，怎么了？"。3.Omarmoistenedhislipsandshoutedinacrackedvoice,“Help!Help!I’mdownhere.”奥马尔舔了舔干裂的嘴唇，用沙哑的声音喊道："救命！救命！我在这下面！"。4.WhenhewasseatedatthetableinJordanian’stavern,hestartedtoexplain“theaffair”.当他在乔丹酒馆的桌旁坐下时，开始解释"那件事"。5.Withaviolenteffortsheconqueredhergriefandrepliedinacalmvoice,“Benstammeredoutanapologytome.”她竭力克制悲痛，用平静的语气回答："本结结巴巴地向我道了歉。"6.ShegreetedJamesandinquired,“Areyoureadyforourfieldtrip?”Jamesdidn’trespond.她向詹姆斯打招呼并询问："实地考察准备好了吗？"詹姆斯没有回应。7.Ipickeduptheballonelasttimeandgrumbledendlesslyatthechildrenaboutthesuddenball,“Pleasejustcometogetthedamnball.”我最后一次捡起球，对着孩子们没完没了地抱怨："拜托你们自己来捡这该死的球！"。8.Ayoungmancametothepolicestation,surroundedbyagroupofjournalists,declaringthathehadspottedthemurderer.一名青年在记者簇拥下走进警局，声称自己发现了凶手。9.“Hi,Andy.I’msorryaboutthespaghettithing,”Catherinemurmuredanapology,7 herfacereddening."嗨，安迪。意大利面的事我很抱歉。"凯瑟琳红着脸低声道歉。10.“Here,Mum!Here!”Reubenexclaimedinahigh-pitchedvoiceasherantoherside."这儿，妈妈！这儿！"鲁本一边高声叫着，一边跑到她身边。11.Next,heturnedtoMikeandyelled,“Givemearock!”接着他转向迈克吼道："给我块石头！"12.ThenAshleycontinued,“Well,let’sgoandsee!”随后艾什莉接着说："那我们去看看吧！"13.Sheadmitted,“I’myoursecretfriendandI’msorryaboutthegift.”她承认道："我是你的神秘朋友，礼物的事我很抱歉。"14.“Nobodycouldunderstandme!”Andysobbed,buryinghisfaceinhishands."没人懂我！"安迪双手捂脸抽泣着。15.Shetiptoedintotheroomandwhisperedtome,“IlookedateveryplantandIknowIgotthebestone!”她蹑手蹑脚进房间对我耳语："我每株植物都看了，肯定挑到了最好的！"【练习】把下面的语篇补充完整。Thatnightthebosscamehometohis14-year-oldson.Thefather1(兴奋地告诉儿子)thathewasgivenablueribbonbyhismanager,whichmadehimsurprised.Hesaid,“It’samazingthat2(他解释道)howheadmiredme,thinkingmeacreativegenius.”Theboy3(低声含糊地说着什么),asifhehadheardnothing.“AsIwasdrivinghome,IthoughtIshouldhonoryouwiththeblueribbon,”thefatherraisedhisvoiceinacertaintone.“MydaysarereallybusyandIdon’tpayalotofattentiontoyou,”4(爸爸继续道).“Ireallyshouldn’thaveignoredyou.”5(爸爸叹着气说)andputtheribbonintheboy’shand.Theboyhuggedhisfatherandstartedsobbing(啜泣).“Youreallymakeadifferencetome,whichisfromthebottomofmyheart,”6(爸爸说着鼓励的话).Theboyraisedhisheadand7(喃喃地说了声谢谢)withtearsinhiseyes,“Dad,Iwastheboywhogaveyourmanageraribbon.”1._________________________________2._________________________________3._________________________________4._________________________________5._________________________________6._________________________________7._________________________________答案1.toldhissoninanexcitedvoice2.heexplained3.mutteredsomethingbetweenhisteeth4.continuedthefather5.Thefathersighed6.thefatherspokewordsofcomfort7.murmuredathankyou（二）“漂亮地说”1.对话＋语气（tone）7 ①ina/an+形容词+tone②inatoneof+名词例句：“YoumustbeAnnie,”hesaidinafriendlytone.他用友好的语气说：“你一定是安妮吧。”“Iwouldloveto,”saidEmilyinapleasanttone.艾米莉用愉快的语气说：“我很乐意。”“Idon’twantto,”saidEmilyinatoneofimpatience.艾米莉用不耐烦的语气说：“我不想。”“NoIdidn’t,”hesaidinalowtone.他压低声音说：“不，我没有。”2.对话＋嗓音（voice）ina/an+形容词+voice例句：“Ididn’tmeanto,”shemurmuredinalowvoice.“我不是故意的，”她低声喃喃道。“Idon’tknowwhatyoumean,”saidFraninaquaveringvoice.“我不明白你的意思，”弗兰声音颤抖地说道。Hecalledoutinaloudvoice.他大声喊道。Thewomanatthedeskgreetedhiminaboredvoice.桌边的女人用一种厌倦的腔调跟他打招呼。3.对话＋介词短语/副词①介词短语in:insurprise/shock/sorrow/horror/angerwith:withdelight/excitement/embarrassment/pride/caution/care/patience/certainty②副词firmly/excitedly/seriously/sincerely/slowly/regretfully例句：“We’renotintrouble!”Ishoutedwithjoy.“我们没惹上麻烦！”我欣喜地喊道。“Ihateyou!”shescreamedinanger.她愤怒地尖叫道：“我恨你！”“Isittrue?”hewhisperedwithastonishment.“是真的吗？”他惊讶地低语道。“I’vebeenwaitingforyou,”shesaidwithasmile.“我一直在等你，”她微笑着说道。“Getoverherethisinstant!”Davidcalledfiercely.“立刻给我过来！”大卫厉声喝道。“Itisn’tfair!”heexclaimedangrily.“这不公平！”他愤怒地喊道。“Youaremyhero!”Kyliesaidaffectionately.“你是我的英雄！”凯莉充满爱意地说道。“Ifeellikeyou’reabandoningme,”sherespondedbitterly.“我感觉你在抛弃我，”她苦涩地回应道。4.对话＋伴随动作7 “Nobodycouldunderstandme!”Andysobbed,buryinghisfaceinhishands.Thefarmerpickedupthedog,kneltdownandsaidinasoftvoice,“It’syoursnow.”Withherheaddown/Withtearsinhereyes,shesaid,“Sorry.”“Hi,Sandy.I’msorryaboutthespaghettithing.”Catherinemurmuredanapology,herfacereddening.“Wanttotryoneon?”Isaid,touchingMarina’shand.Thewomaninthecarjumpedout,screaming,“Youidiot!Whydidn’tyoulookwhereyouweregoing?”【练习】把下面的语篇补充完整。Asthetwinslookedaroundindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Atthesightofthemessandthekids’gloomyfaces,heimmediatelyrealizedwhattheywereupto.“Needanyhelp?”1(爸爸微笑地看着双胞胎，温柔地问),whofeltdiscouragedatbeingfoundscrewingthingsup.Jeffstammeredouttheirfailedplan,2(他羞红了脸).“That’sagreatidea.MayIjoinyou?”Fatherresponded.Atthis,thetwinscheeredupandrolleduptheirsleevestocleanthestovebeforetheylearnedtofrythebreadfollowingtheirfather’sinstructions.SooncamethedelicioussmellofFrenchtoastandchickenporridge,atwhichthetwinsfeltagreatsenseofachievement.Witheverythingsettled,Fatherleftthekitchen,promisingtokeeptheirsecret.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Sittingupinconfusion,motherwasgreetedwiththekids’smilingeyesandhappygiggles.Beforeshecouldrealizewhatwasgoingon,thetwinspresentedthebreakfasttray,3(大声喊道),“HappyMother’sDay!”4(惊讶地盯着精心准备的食物，妈妈饱含深情地说),“Thankyou,darling.That’sthebiggestsurpriseI’veeverhad!”ItwasthenthatFatherentered,5(用赞许的口吻说),“Thatmustbethebestbreakfastever!”Motherbitintoapieceoftoast,noddingherheadapprovinglywithgreatsatisfaction.Exchangingglances,Fatherandthetwinsbeamedbrightlywithpleasure.1._________________________________2._________________________________3._________________________________4._________________________________5._________________________________答案1.Fathergentlyinquired,smilinglylookingatthetwins2.hisfaceflushingwithembarrassment3.exclaiminginaloudvoice4.Staringatthecarefullypreparedfoodinwide-eyedsurprise,Mothersaidaffectionately5.sayinginanapprovingtone二、“动作链”描写（一）“and”连接多个并列谓语动词1.Shewalkedtothecashregisterandpaidthemoney.她走到收银台付了钱。2.Irushedhome,searchedthroughmycollectionofhats,andgrabbedthecottonone.我冲回家，翻遍帽子收藏，抓起那顶棉质的。3.Hestoppedthetaxi,jumpedinwiththesuitcaseandtoldthedriver,“Gotothe7 policestation,please.”他拦下出租车，拎着箱子跳进去，对司机说：“请去警察局。”4.Theboysrushedexcitedlytothelake,tookofftheirclothesandjumpedintothewater.男孩们激动地冲向湖边，脱掉衣服跳进水里。5.Shedashedforward,kneltdownandgatheredhersonintoherarms.她冲上前，跪下来，将儿子搂入怀中。6.Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathandbegantosing.歌手扫视观众，深吸一口气，开始演唱。7.Wecrossedbigriversandvastplains,climbedhighmountains,andoverlookeddeepvalleys.我们跨越大江平原，攀越高山，俯瞰深谷。8.Hereacheddeepintohispocket,pulledoutahandfulofchange,andheldituptothefarmer.他把手深深伸进口袋，掏出一把零钱，举到农夫面前。9.Heputonhiscoat,stormedoutandslammedthedoorshut.他穿上外套，冲出门去，"砰"地摔上了门。10.Lornacametothewindow,openeditandlookedoutupatthenightsky.洛娜走到窗边，打开窗户，仰头望向夜空。（二）非谓语动词表达多个动作1.Walkingtothedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.2.Holdingthenecklaceinherhand,Jennyliftedherlip,tearsbeginningtoblurhervision.3.Hearingthis,hermothersmiled,pattingherbackgently.4.Hedoveintothewater,kickinghislegsandstretchinghisarmsasfarashecould.5.Seeingthecoatinthebag,helookedveryastonishedandthencalledhismothertogoout.6.Feelingstrongernow,Janewalkedalongthestream,hopingthatitwouldleadhertothelake.7.Standingbesidetheemptyroad,theylookedupintothesky,feelingthepreciouspeacefromwithin.8.Throwingtheovercoatacrossherarm,shecrossedthehallquietly.9.Rushingtowardsthedoor,sheopenedit,saying,“Here,Edmond,hereIam”.10.Hismother,standingatthedoor,criedtearsofjoy.11.Puttingthebookwhereitbelonged,theboytiptoedoutoftheroomaslightlyaspossible.12.Janegottoherfeetshakily,approachedherhusbandandthrewherselfintohisarms,sobbinguncontrollablyonhisshoulders.【练习】把下面的语篇补充完整。Inthemorning,asscheduled,1(双胞胎早早起床，踮着脚走进厨房，从袋子里舀出面粉).Oncetheysetaboutmakingbread,theyfeltconfused.Atthattime,2(他们的爸爸溜进厨房，轻拍双胞胎的肩膀，柔声安慰道),“Don’tquit.Youcanovercomethechallenge.”Thetwinsmadethebreadsmoothly.Then,3(他们端着早餐，向楼上走去，喊醒他们的妈妈).Withhereyesglitteringwithexcitement,themotherwassocontentthatshegatheredherchildrenintoherarms.1._________________________________7 2._________________________________3._________________________________答案1.thetwinsgotupearly,tiptoedtothekitchenandscoopedsomeflouroutofthebag.2.theirfatherslidintothekitchen,pattingthetwins’shouldersandcomfortingtheminasoftvoice.3.theycarriedthebreakfast,advancedupstairsandwokeuptheirmother.7