初中英语2025届中考热点话题作文写作指导（环境保护）

热点话题作文写作指导（环境保护）一、题目近年来，我国全面展开蓝天、碧水、净土保卫战。为了号召同学们参与环保行动，学校将组织一次主题为“Let’sGoGreen”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇80词以上的演讲稿。内容要点：1.谈谈你为环保做过什么及感受；2.制订你的环保计划。注意事项：1.开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。二、五步写作法第一步细审题定要点（五审法：审主题、审人称、审文体、审时态、审要点）1）审主题：环保2）审文体：应用文3）审人称：以第一人称为主4）审时态：一般过去时；经历5）定要点1：环保的经历和感受6）定要点2：未来的计划第二步分段落列要点首段(Beginning)：提出环保倡议：重新使用、减少用量和回收利用。中间段(Body)：环保的经历及其未来计划结尾(Ending)：表达希望和呼吁：希望有一个更加美好的地球。第三步扩句子精加工首段：提出环保倡议[一般句]Asmiddleschoolstudents,wecanreuse,reduceandrecycle.[高分句]Asmiddleschoolstudents,it’sourresponsibilitytoreuse,reduceandrecycle.（灵活句式）中间段：要点一：环保经历和感受[一般句]Lastwinter,Icollectedusedpaperandbottles.Iturnedthemintoarocket.Igaveittomybrother.Hefeltamazedatmywork.[高分句]Istillrememberthatduringthewintervacation,Imadegooduseofwastedthingssuchaspaperandbottlesbyturningthemintoahandmaderocket.LaterIgaveittomybrotherasagift.Hisamazedfacialexpressionimpressedmedeeply.(makegooduseof,详细描述)要点二：环保的未来计划[一般句]I’llreusethingsinsteadofthrowingthemaway.Iwillreducetheuseofenergy.I’llsorttherubbishtorecycleit.结尾：表达希望和呼吁[一般句]Ifeveryonetakespartinprotectingtheenvironment,theearthwillbecomebetterandbetter.[高分句]Ifeveryonetakespartinprotectingtheenvironment,theearthwillbeabetterplaceforallofustoliveon.Takeactionnow!/Ibelievethatifeveryonemakesgreateffortstoprotectourenvironment,ourearthwillbeabeautifulplaceforusto3,liveon.Effectiveactionneedstobetakennow!(不定式)第四步连句子成短文Asweallknow,Chinaismakingeveryefforttoprotecttheenvironment.Asmiddleschoolstudents,it’sourresponsibilitytoreuse,reduceandrecycle.Istillrememberthatduringthewintervacation,Imadegooduseofwastedthingssuchaspaperandbottlesbyturningthemintoahandmaderocket.LaterIgaveittomybrotherasagift.Hisamazedfacialexpressionimpressedmedeeply.Iwasproud,too.Thewastewasbroughtbacktolifewithjustalittlecreativity.Inspiredbythisexperience,Iplantodomoreinthefuture.Firstofall,I’llcontinuetoreusethingsinsteadofthrowingthemaway.Secondly,IcanrideabiketoschoolratherthantakingabusandturnoffthelightwhenI’mnotusingit.Lastly,I’llsorttherubbishandsendtherecyclablematerialstotherecyclingcenter.Ifeveryonetakespartinprotectingtheenvironment,theearthwillbeabetterplaceforallofustoliveon.Takeactionnow!第五步查全文得高分首先依次检查人称、时态是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。三、素材积累目前环境问题：1.乱扔垃圾throwrubbishabout2.砍伐树木cutdowntrees3.倒废水pourwastewater4.全球变暖globalwarming如何保护环境：5.植树planttrees6.及时关灯turnoffthelightsintime7.节约用水/用电savewater/electricity8.过低碳生活livealow-carbonlife9.节省能源saveenergy10.绿色出行travelinagreenway保护环境的意义：11.Waterandfoodareimportantandnecessaryresources.水和食物是重要且必要的资源。12.It’severyone’sdutytoprotectanimals.保护动物，人人有责。13.Whenthewellisdry,weknowtheworthofwater.井枯方知水珍贵。四、实战演练假如你是李雷，上周参观了以“WorkingtheWasteintoMagic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息，写一篇短文，在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。词数100左右。注意事项：1.短文须介绍至少两项展品，可适当发挥；2.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。【参考范文】高分句Firstofall,I'llcontinuetoreusethingsratherthanthrowingthemaway.Moreover,3,Idecidetorideabiketoschoolinsteadoftakingthebusandturnoffthelightsintimetosaveenergy.Lastly,it'salsoagoodideatosorttherubbishandsendtherecyclablematerialstotherecyclingcenter.时态：一般过去时、一般现在时　人称：以第一、三人称为主　要点：展示物品、物品材质、自己的感受Hello,everyone!I’dliketotellyousomethingabouttheshow“WorkingtheWasteintoMagic”.Anumberofcreativeworkswereonshow,includingclothesmadefromwastepaperandmodelplanesmadeofusedwoodandglass.Anotherfascinatingworkisachairthatismadeofplasticbottles.Theyaregluedtogetherandpaintedindifferentcolors.Iwasmostinterestedinabackpackforcomputers.Itismadeoutofapairofoldjeans!Withthezipperofthejeansonthetop,twopocketsontwosides,thebackpacklooksbothusefulandfashionable.Itevenhasalogo!Ifeltamazedhowwastecouldbeputintosuchgooduse.Itreallyhelpstosaveenergyandbuildagreenerfuture.3